Friday, March 19, 2010
The River
What i lerend about brine is that he is that he is good in the out doors. He noes when it is going to rain and he noes how to survive in the out doors. he can start a good fire and he can build a bow to catch fish, and he can build a trap to catch fish. he noes what to eat for bares and what not to eat for bears and where to find them.
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good job will theres not that many words wrong
ReplyDeleteWill,
ReplyDeleteDue to the fact that this is being published on the internet, my suggestion might be to type your blog on a Word Document first so you can take advantage of tools like spell check and grammar check. Also, another suggestion would be to read the blog to yourself before publishing it to make sure that it makes sense to you.
As for the book, I knew that you'd like this book. I'm assuming that you've read this author before. I would like to get more details overall. For example, how does Brian know which berries he can eat and which ones are poisonous? How does he know how to make a bow to catch fish? Is there anything that he learned to hard way?
I would like to see you move beyond summarizing the book and add more connections to what you've read. I think readers of your blog want to know about what YOU are thinking when you read. At least that's what I want :) Thanks for sharing, Will...
Mr. L.